tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post7166340697260168117..comments2016-02-03T06:23:26.419-08:00Comments on RAGHAV_SIVA: Kadhal UnarvugalRaaaaaaaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-2390982917715513192010-06-14T08:07:25.152-07:002010-06-14T08:07:25.152-07:00@ Naveen
Thanks :)
The biggest problem in typin...@ Naveen <br /><br />Thanks :)<br /><br />The biggest problem in typing in tamil is that it doesnt give the expected word. Most of the time i dont want to correct it then and there because it stops my flow of thought. So i have to look for a better editor.<br /><br />And regarding all other points .. My story is a narration .. that is right .. the story records only the feelings of the person who fell in love rather than the happening of the story itself. <br /><br />The biggest differenence between a movie and a story i feel is .. Only the thought flow and feeling can be made as a story rather than recording the actual incidents itself.. i dont know how much i am successful in that ..<br /><br />I ll take ur inputs ... let me see how i can use them in the futureRaaaaaaaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-80514392367854252402010-06-13T22:06:40.689-07:002010-06-13T22:06:40.689-07:00hi raag,
Good try..
and hope u will improve with ...hi raag,<br />Good try.. <br />and hope u will improve with spelling in future :) cos it breaks the flow often.<br /><br />and as i understand the story begined like this..<br />//சமிபத்தில் ஒரு தமிழ் படம் பார்த்தேன் . அதில் வரும் மிக பிரபலமான வரி.. // <br /><br />it didnt gave a feel of jumping into story.. it was more towards essay, so was the narration.<br /><br />the feel was good, but i felt it was broken on sentence formation in middle.<br /><br />and the story didn't justify the relation btw the two before the conversation begins.. <br /><br />// நான் உங்கிட்ட ஒண்ணு சொல்லணும் ..//<br />this statement needs tat kind of justification/hint i feel.<br /><br />keep writing!!நவீன்https://www.blogger.com/profile/02300801820840719784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-3420229795907666112010-06-09T22:40:26.979-07:002010-06-09T22:40:26.979-07:00@arun prasath thanks machi
@santhosh thanks ma...@arun prasath thanks machi <br /><br />@santhosh thanks machi and i wrote this story in india .. :)Raaaaaaaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-45178229767909541542010-06-09T21:26:45.300-07:002010-06-09T21:26:45.300-07:00arputham machi!! pasanga india vitu ponale tamil m...arputham machi!! pasanga india vitu ponale tamil mela neraya patru varuthu.. good start and going. keep it up!!pcfsantyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917862524814445540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-15927774804594470662010-06-09T05:54:52.395-07:002010-06-09T05:54:52.395-07:00i copied some lines.....but it didn't come...i copied some lines.....but it didn't come...ArunPrasath Vetriselvanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05651613166374273987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-80218715052561431392010-06-09T05:53:25.740-07:002010-06-09T05:53:25.740-07:00<<<<<<<<<<<>&g...<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>><br /><br />Good lines...right fit for making stories interesting...ArunPrasath Vetriselvanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05651613166374273987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-67130692366452203082010-06-09T05:47:40.440-07:002010-06-09T05:47:40.440-07:00@vidya Thanks
@Anu .. I dont know in what sense...@vidya Thanks <br /><br />@Anu .. I dont know in what sense you said .. ( I mean its good or bad ) but still thanks .. :)Raaaaaaaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-5211615228627947052010-06-09T01:29:19.258-07:002010-06-09T01:29:19.258-07:00ennala mudiyala ;)ennala mudiyala ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07532823666585381493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-89343952797495549822010-06-08T22:22:21.629-07:002010-06-08T22:22:21.629-07:00நல்ல முயற்சி ;)நல்ல முயற்சி ;)Vidhya Chandrasekaranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03348378722673467555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-14311937419915027492010-06-08T22:05:19.136-07:002010-06-08T22:05:19.136-07:00@Meenakshi THanks a lot
@Anand Thanks for your ...@Meenakshi THanks a lot <br /><br />@Anand Thanks for your Suggestion. I ll try to use the same in future stories. Thanks for reading :)<br /><br />@Nirmal its not my story .. its an imaginery story. I ll try to write with fantasies in the future. Not immediately .. but when i get some idea .. :)<br /><br />@Uday. May be you are right. Some thing is stopping him to express him self from the girl. we have seen many real life characters like that ..:)Raaaaaaaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-17836386681935796522010-06-08T21:47:38.021-07:002010-06-08T21:47:38.021-07:00lalaku dol dappi ma !
Raghavan, Nice try !
You ...lalaku dol dappi ma !<br /><br />Raghavan, Nice try ! <br /><br />You said its Kurinchi Malar !<br />But when you describe you have described more fear part of love than the beauty ! Atleast i felt so.....Udayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09852765933183883372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-2408913651843319572010-06-08T16:37:47.760-07:002010-06-08T16:37:47.760-07:00hey Machan,
You are becoming one hella story tell...hey Machan,<br /><br />You are becoming one hella story teller.<br /><br />So does the hero go to her wedding and eat curd rice/sambar rice ??<br /><br />Machan good attempt, add some fantasy ending like Minnale machan :)<br /><br />Atleast in stories we can have positive endings!!<br /><br />btw is it ur ending? or stories ending ;)Nimmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00526449147699248405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-43622518682006100382010-06-08T13:19:04.733-07:002010-06-08T13:19:04.733-07:00Azhagana, nerthiyana kadhal urai :)
aanaal nanba...Azhagana, nerthiyana kadhal urai :) <br /><br />aanaal nanba unadhu kadhalin seetrathayum, unarvugalayum nandraga unarthiya nee... un kadhal valiyai kathai aarambathil konjam serthirukkalaamo endru thonugirathu. athanaal thaan un kadhalin valiyai silaraal unaramudiyaamal pogum. <br /><br />ennai pondra makku sambranigal.. purivatharkaaga sonen. just oru suggestion thaan.<br /><br />un penavin mye theeravendum, kaakidhathil kadhai nirayavendum. <br /><br />Vaazhthukkal<br />Anand C@nandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04424757299198715080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-9247354121209229192010-06-08T12:29:28.414-07:002010-06-08T12:29:28.414-07:00unbelivable that this your first short storie .
M...unbelivable that this your first short storie .<br /><br />My heartly wishes .becoming fan to your blogs and stories :).coolfunsidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02126630155579048196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120297548223206812.post-80762336467631581642010-06-08T12:21:04.017-07:002010-06-08T12:21:04.017-07:00climax .. sapaya irundalum .. first kadhai nala ko...climax .. sapaya irundalum .. first kadhai nala konjam adjust pani konga ..,Raaaaaaaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027136372757913369noreply@blogger.com